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Flight To Madrid


rsadasiv

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This was an early Dance Music For Grownups track, but it never worked out the way I thought it could.

 

It's about a Euro-Disco DJ (with some borrowings from the plot of Ulysses) and my recent Daft Punk obsession is making me think I should try this again as a straight up dance track.

Partial demo: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=5566869

Lyric needs cutting. Too much, too much.

The sun

Scatters through the blinds

Covers twist

Into a tie that binds

The breakfast nook,

Where she cries and smokes

Looking past

Curtains and plants.

 

D. you know

I hate it when you go.

Staring out

Over the street below.

Why don

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Lee Knight wrote:

 

I love it right through the Version 4 verse then it falls apart for me. Assuming you're going to use it with the music I just heard, I think those lyrics will fly nicely. Nice. But after that and that chorus I'm lost.

 

 

I take that back, I'm liking this too:

 

Dance is a beat

Of ecstasy

Rock is a sound

Of needs unmet.

Pop: melody

And unity.

Jazz: harmony

And regret.

 

 

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