Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 Here we go. Let me have it, if you please... yes, I know. Modern Country. Ick. Sorry, it's my thing of late... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted August 7, 2013 Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 Its says the 'video is unavailable' :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 Thanks for trying, I'll figure it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 weird... It's working for me here... hmmm... ... ... OK, figured it out. It should be good now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted August 7, 2013 Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 Sounds great! The genre seems well-served as well. I especially like the 'oo's between "they're living in" and "lost world". And what's that cool sound in the background? It is slide guitar or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 davie wrote: And what's that cool sound in the background? It is slide guitar or something? Slide guitar with lots of delay and plate verb... yep. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 This is a fantastic track. Really well done. The only thing that's missing, in my opinion, is the tug-on-the-heart-strings story/lyrical hook. I'm not feeling the kind of emotional connection I want to feel with the material. I'm not sure why I should care about these characters or what they've lost.I'm sorry to be a downer about this, but I think that's the most important element in a country song.I think the lost world idea has to have some real, palpable heartbreak attached to it. Once you've got that, you're good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 Agree to disagree Internet fist bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rhino55 Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 David Hooper would tell you to do what you do, play your game, and don't apologize for it. I'd agree. +1 to what Saturn already posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 rhino55 wrote:David Hooper would tell you to do what you do, play your game, and don't apologize for it. I'd agree. Do what now? You lost me there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 7, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 7, 2013 Ah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LeonardScaper Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 Been waiting to hear something from you since my return....I like where you've gone. Very clean production....cool guitars. Great Lee knight vocals as usual.Regarding the dely on the vox.....I like doing that a lot myself. I have found that careful automation of the return from the delay bus is crucial to get those echos to be right where you want them and nowhere else. And timing, of course, is everything. I always time mine by ear.....I really need to feel the movement.Remember that you can automate the feedback as well to get just the right amount of repeats. As it is so often in this game...less is definitely more with vocal delays. If you get them just right they really move the tune forward, right?If you listen to yours near the beginning they are just a bit haphazard. I really like the use here......I'm sure you'll get them perfect with a little more grinding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members nat whilk II Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 ok, so.....I dubbed some piano on top of Lee's most excellent song. Lotta nerve, huh? Well, I asked first reasons for doing so if not apparent from listening.... 1 - I just got the itch listening to the track, said "wow I really want to play piano along with that" 2 - the piano is a more nostalgic instrument than elect gtr, etc so I think it works as an instrument choice 3 - some of Lee's ac gtr voicings are a bit too unresolved/floaty to my ear for this genre, so I did some pretty obvious stuff 4 - the chorus is the most fun - I dare say the thing rocks a tad more with the piano going if I do say so myself... this is only partial and never mind the clam or two - I'll work up and tweak the rest later but I'm already shirking important duties with this fun stuff...let me know if y'all think this works.... Piano discovered in Lost World!! nat whilk ii Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Oswlek Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 Lee Knight wrote: Here we go. Let me have it, if you please... yes, I know. Modern Country. Ick. Sorry, it's my thing of late... Listening again, I think you need to tee up that final chorus a little better. The way it keeps playing in my head is inserting another second at 3:20.5 with another "I'm livin' in!" sung a little more urgently before finally hitting "Lost world." Can't upload a demo, so if this doesn't make any sense let me know and I'll give you a call. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members oldgitplayer Posted August 7, 2013 Members Share Posted August 7, 2013 Very cool song and production. I think the feedback has covered all things that I would also mention.I like the slide guitar tone - it had a Harrison/Wilbury era flavour to it which works for this song.There's just one thing - at the end of the song, the acoustic guitar takes us out with its descending phrase - very nice - and then you sing 'Lost World' again. I'd cut that - it feels intrusive once the guitar has descended. I'd like it to wrap up with that alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted August 8, 2013 Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 The piano that Nat added definitely added an extra dimension to the track. I made it sound bigger. That's probably one of the reasons why I tend to use piano on most of my tracks. lol. I would use a different timbre for it though or at least some EQ, seems too bright or forward. Either way, I think a piano track might be worth exploring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 I haven't been able to Lee's or Nat's input. Chomping at the bit till tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 Nice Nat! I love it. I think I'll take a pass myself using some of your ideas there. Thanks for the inspiration. The part isn't quite what I'm looking for. It's great but is more of an E Street Band/East Coast 70's thing. I dig that but it feels a bit removed from the genre I'm leaning towards. Still... your ideas and performance are very cool. Thanks man. Very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 LeonardScaper wrote: Been waiting to hear something from you since my return....I like where you've gone. Very clean production....cool guitars. Great Lee knight vocals as usual. Regarding the dely on the vox.....I like doing that a lot myself. I have found that careful automation of the return from the delay bus is crucial to get those echos to be right where you want them and nowhere else. And timing, of course, is everything. I always time mine by ear.....I really need to feel the movement. Remember that you can automate the feedback as well to get just the right amount of repeats. As it is so often in this game...less is definitely more with vocal delays. If you get them just right they really move the tune forward, right? If you listen to yours near the beginning they are just a bit haphazard. I really like the use here......I'm sure you'll get them perfect with a little more grinding. Thanks Leo! Regarding the delay... yeah I got you. I've automated delays beyond tweakdom. I know what you're talking about. Honestly, this was phase 1 and drew the line at getting too tweaky. And sort of got used to it. But you're absolutely right. I will automated them into covert status. Thanks mang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 Oswlek wrote:Lee Knight wrote: Here we go. Let me have it, if you please... yes, I know. Modern Country. Ick. Sorry, it's my thing of late... Listening again, I think you need to tee up that final chorus a little better. The way it keeps playing in my head is inserting another second at 3:20.5 with another "I'm livin' in!" sung a little more urgently before finally hitting "Lost world." Can't upload a demo, so if this doesn't make any sense let me know and I'll give you a call.Great catch. When I was doing the the one "I'm livin' in!...", cutting the drums and planning it out... it immediately brought ideas to me that I should do another but... then I resisted. But hearing you say that, well, that may have been the way to go. Let me make sure were on the same page here, like this? drum fill - I'm liv-n! in!drum fill - jus' livin' in!......A lost world... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 oldgitplayer wrote: Very cool song and production. I think the feedback has covered all things that I would also mention. I like the slide guitar tone - it had a Harrison/Wilbury era flavour to it which works for this song. There's just one thing - at the end of the song, the acoustic guitar takes us out with its descending phrase - very nice - and then you sing 'Lost World' again. I'd cut that - it feels intrusive once the guitar has descended. I'd like it to wrap up with that alone. I agree. I ended up putting that in because my guitar noodle and mandolin session fizzled (sorry Jay) and there was nothing to really take the helm there. I think piano and mandolin will allow me to keep the interest level up there and I'll be able to take that out. Good point and nice catch. Thank you sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted August 8, 2013 You'll just have to go see Harmony Korrine's Spring Breakers so Franco can make it up to you. Sprang brwake foevah yo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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