OK, you guys are an inspiration - I've had this music and chorus lyric for +5 years and finally finished the lyric. It's meant to be a sketch, but still quietly devastating, so the last verse might be too much. Not sure I need alternate choruses.
The music is here with a dummy lyric, but you can get the vibe. I can't re-do the vocal for a few days, so you'll have to imagine the new words. EDIT: Here is a rough demo with the new words. EDIT #2: Here's a better mix (v4).
Let me know what you think!
"air enough to breathe"
I woke up cud'ling empty space
kissing impressions of your face