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Set Your Troubles Free


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Thought of this while driving in to work this morning. Listened to Hank Williams, "Cold, Cold Heart" and that song helped with the idea. naturally it's pretty rough and far from complete but I'd thought I'd finally share a new idea with you all.

 

Revised version: (thank you stickboy)

Set your troubles free

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I try so hard to show you, you

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stickboymusic wrote:

I like it.

 

It seems to be a hard one to get to flow due to some line lengths , edit ideas attached.

Of course if you have a melody that it fits to then ignore all this  :)

 

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I try so hard to show you, you

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