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  • Set Your Troubles Free

    Thought of this while driving in to work this morning. Listened to Hank Williams, "Cold, Cold Heart" and that song helped with the idea. naturally it's pretty rough and far from complete but I'd thought I'd finally share a new idea with you all.

     

    Revised version: (thank you stickboy)

    Set your troubles free

    V1.

    I try so hard to show you, you


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    I like it.


    It seems to be a hard one to get to flow due to some line lengths , edit ideas attached.

    Of course if you have a melody that it fits to then ignore all this 

     

    V1.

    I try so hard to show you, you

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    • Foose31
      Foose31 commented
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      Nice changes! ^^^^^

    • Foose31
      Foose31 commented
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      stickboymusic wrote:

      I like it.


      It seems to be a hard one to get to flow due to some line lengths , edit ideas attached.

      Of course if you have a melody that it fits to then ignore all this 

       

      V1.

      I try so hard to show you, you

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